just a note on timing. I'm happy to send it on to him tues next week - which gives the bank holiday weekend to have a read. It is roughly 13000 words long, so nothing too difficult.

 

Guidelines for reading: essentially it's a review of the contents as they pertain to the game's enjoyability. Additional ideas for content and mechanisms that will make playing fun and commercial (the latter isn't as much of a priority though at this point) are also welcomed.

 

Finally it's not the point at which to point out possible exploits etc as this document is a pitch/proposal and not a technical rules briefing.

 

Having seen these types of document at this stage of development in other arenas, much of it will inevitably be weeded out by developers and accountants as too expensive, too ambitious, too boring or too unworkable so at this stage I've tried to exclude nothing anyone suggested in the threads as I felt our job was to be as ambitious as possible.

 

Comments on grammar are welcome.

 

cheers

 

Stew

 

If you'd like to have a copy of the final doc let me know.

S

 

Was a fun exercise and if something comes of it even better.